Traditioanal Food vs Fast Food
The description of between the
similarities and differences of a types of food. Types of food that will be in compare to the
between traditioanal food and fast food. It’s interesting to compare because it
has a characteristic of the in term of shape, a taste and creation method.
Traditional food and fast food have some aspect interesting to discussed. It
has similarities and differences between the both. Both as traditioanal food an
fast food have characteristic and variety of differences. The meaning of
traditional food and fast food, the similarities of the both, and the
differences of the both.
Traditional food is the food usually in
the consumption by the people with taste of typical for in received in the
community. Traditional food is
generation of the ancestors traditional food. Traditional food Indonesia is a
meal typical of the local native from the start of the full meal and drinks, a
distraction containing nutrition as well as in the consumption of by the people
of the area with a variety basic materials. While fast food is food where the
process of the creation more simple and quickly. the price is affordable for
the society at large for some kind of food. Food is prepared quickly called
fast food, usually this term referring to the food on sale in restaurant. This
food also has the protein quite to health.
The two types of food is at the same
have some advantages. The superiority of traditional food are the food still
awake conservation in the area of the local, have a form and a taste of that
unique, have texture is different with other food, in term of the nutrition
food is more variety. This is because of
the traditional food still use natural materials. Traditional food is also not
well known as the another food. In addition to the traditional food, fast food
also has the edge of the process of creation faster, simple, and the price is
affordable. This food has some nutritions to health. There are some fast
food that have in high nutritions namely
pecel, gado-gado, etc.
Even though they have excellent, but
they have differences between traditioanal food and fast food. The differences
the content of the nutrition between traditioanal food and fast food that are
traditioanal food has a lot of the nutrition because made of natural
ingredients, while fast food has a little nutrition because made of materials
are less natural. Although in term of pamoritas traditioanal food more lost,
but in term of health traditioanal food healthier because this food is made of
materials are more experienced. In term taste and texture fast food is
superior, because it has influenced of globalization and creation has been
using advanced tools that can product a lot more food quickly. In term of of
marketing, fast food is superior than traditioanal food. In the form of a
variety of traditioanal food is superior and interesting than fast food.
Traditioanal food is usually sale in traditioanal market, while fast food can
be found iv restaurant.
The conclusion of the text are
traditioanal food is a meal typical of the local native from the start of the
full meal and drinks, a distraction containing nutrition as well as in the
consumption of by the people of the area with a variety basic materials. While
fast food is food where the process of the creation more simple and quickly.
Traditioanal food and
fast food have similarities and
differences of a types of food.
I think, it is not "traditional food indonesia" but "indonesian traditional food"
ReplyDeleteHana Suci Anggraeni (1420302175/E)
ReplyDeletehi Antika, i'd like to give you my comments about your essay. here they are:
1. there is mistype inside your title right? it supposed to be "Traditional Food vs Fast Food" :)
2. on the first paragraph, the words " will be in compare to" supposed to be " will be compared".
3. on the second paragraph, you'd better to put "which" inside the statement "Traditional food is the food usually" so it will become "Traditional food is the food which usually". then, the words " in the consumption " supposed to be "consumpted by".
4. on the fourth paragraph, the words "has a lot of the nutrition" should be "has a lot of the nutritions", because the context is plural.then, the words "because made of natural " supposed to be "because it is made from", why? because the context is telling about passive voice.
5. you have to mantain your grammar ^^
That's all Antika.
Hi... this is my comment for yor esssay
ReplyDelete1. " a types of food" should be "types of food "
2. " to discussed" should be " to discuss"
3. ". the price" should be ". The price"
4. "in restaurant." should be "in the restaurant."
5. "The two types of food is at " should be "The two types of food are in "
6. "This is because of the traditional food still use" should be "This is because of the traditional food still using”
7. "creation faster, simple," should be "creation faster, simpler,
andreas indra bagus (1420302178)
ReplyDeletehi antika
hhe you made a typo on your title (traditional not traditioanal ) hahaha :D
OK JUST it and KEEP SPIRIT !!
Hi Antika! I'd like to correct some mistakes in your essay. Here they are :
ReplyDelete1. On paragraph 1, "The description of between" should be "The description between" without the word "of"
2. "Types of food that will be in compare to the between traditioanal food and fast food" will be better if you write it "Types of food that will be compared are traditioanal food and fast food"
3. "it has a characteristic of the in term of shape" should be "it has a characteristic in term of the shape"
4. "some aspect interesting to discussed" should be "some interesting aspects to be discussed"
5. "t has similarities and differences between the both" will be better if you write it "Both of them have similarities and differences"
6. It should be "The meaning of traditional food and fast food, the similarities of the both and the differences of the both" without coma before the word "and"
7. "Traditional food is the food usually" should be "Traditional food is the food that usually"
8. You have to pay attention to your grammar and dictions. :)
Thank you ^^