Homeschooling vs Public School
These days, the education world is
more develop than before. People can choose the school that they want to
attend. There are two types of school that people can choose, homeschooling and
public school. Homeschooling is learning-teaching activity that takes place in
student’s home, so the students will have some privacy while studying. Students
that have many activities outside the academic field, like celebrities, will
choose homeschooling because it is the simple and efficient way for them to
study. Public school is general school that is provided by the government.
General people will choose to attend public school because they can meet and
study together with the other students. Homeschooling provides education and has
purposes same as public school, but their currriculum, environment and the
parents’ role are different.
Homeschooling provides the school materials
same as public school. Students that choose homeschooling don’t need to afraid
about their school material. Although public school students have tighter schedules
from them, it doesn’t mean they have more knowledge. Homeschooling and public
school students will get same materials depends on their levels. Besides it,
homeschooling and public school have same purposes. Both schools help the
students to discover their skills and achieve their targets in study. Students
will have knowledge and achievements that can help them to continue their study
in higher level.
In terms of curriculum, homeschooling
curriculum is not tight as public school curriculum. Homeschooling can follow
government curriculum or make their own curriculum. It depends on the students’
necessities and interest. Students can have a discussion with homeschooling
side about what they want and need. In contrast, public school has tighter
curriculum than homeschooling. It has to follow government curriculum that is
designed by education practitioners.
Students can’t determine what they want and can’t change the school curriculum.
Then, homeschooling environment has calm
and safe environment because it takes place in students’ home. The students
will feel comfortable and enjoy the study because they familiar with the
environment. They believe that home is the safest environment for them without
any distractions from others. The most important is the students can study
peacefully and focus at their study. Unlike homeschooling, public school has
lively environment. The students can meet and study together with their
friends, even make jokes. The main reason why almost of people choose to attend
public school is public school environment makes them happy. They can solve the
problems in their study with their friends and they are not alone like the
homeschoolling students.
The parents’ role in homeschooling
dominate the process of studying. They have to be creative to organize their
child education system. They decide what
is good for their child and must know about how the process of studying is good
or not, because they also participate in designing the homeschooling
curriculum. They will control their child’s schedule and provides the
facilities for their child. The success of homeschooling students is the
students’ parents’ responsible. The parents’ role in public school differs from
the parents’ role in homeschooling. The parents will follow the school’s system
and the responsible is in school side. The parents give their trust to teacher
in school to control their child’s study and schedule.
Shortly, both homeschooling and public
school are good. It depends on people’s needs and wants. They all have some
advantages and disadvantages. People have their own reason why they choose
homeschooling or attending a public school. Homeschooling will give calm and
some privacy to students without any distractions, so they can deeply focus in
their study. Public school is in more lively environment, but they will be able
to interact with others and they do not feel lonely. You may find it difficult
to choose homeschooling or public school, so choose it based on your interest
and choose it wisely.
Written by Shafira Adhelia (1420302179/ Class E)
your essay very good pay attention on written for example on sentence " the parents' " should be " the parent's ".
ReplyDeletethank you :) sorry :)
Thank you for your suggestion, but what I mean in this essay is parent in plural, so I wrote "parents' responsible" not "parent's responsible".
ReplyDeleteDwi arif wibowo
ReplyDeleteHi shafira… this is my comment for your essay
" their currriculum" should be changed to " their curriculum "
" world is more develop " should be changed to " world is more developed "
"focus at their study " should be changed to "focus on their study"
" students’ parents’ responsible" should be changed to " students’ parents’ responsibility"
I’m not perfect. Correct me if I’m wrong
Thank you!
DeleteHana Suci Anggraeni (1420302175/E)
ReplyDeleteHi Shafira..I'd like to give you some comments about your essay..here they are:
On second paragraph, "more knowledge" should be "more knowledges". the word "depends on" supposed to be "depend on". then, "in study" supposed to be "in studying" or you'd better to replace that with "in their study". the last, words "knowledge and achievements" supposed to be "knowledges and achievements".
That's all.. almost perfect writing ^^
andreas indra bagus (1420302178)
ReplyDeletehi.. shafira
you made a typo in currriculum :D Double "r" not triple "r"
paragraph 2 (to continue their study in higher level.) or (to continue their study in THE higher level.)
HHE sorry if my comment worng . keep spirit !!
Dian kusumawati (1420302192)
ReplyDeleteHello shafira
This is my comment for you.
"Almost of people" I think you should change it to be "almost all of the people"
Thanks. Cmiiw
Keep spirit