Ibnul Chusna Abdul Hamid A
Comparison and Contrast Essay
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Class 5 / E
Guava fruit and Orange fruit
The fruit is a part of
the plant derived from flowers. fruit is produced
of invasion of stamens
pistil. Inside the fruit are seeds, which are key parts of plants which breed
in generative. Guava is one of the plants fruits (guava) this plant comes from the Brazilian Central
America, spread to Thailand until then to Asia to Indonesia . Guava is a tropical plant can be grown in
sub-tropical regions. While orange is a flowering plant whose members shaped
tree with a sour taste fresh, although many of them there that has a sweet
taste plant. Oranges originated from East Asia and Southeast Asia .Plant can live in tropical area
Fruit guava and
oranges are fruits that contain vitamin C. Both of these fruits can be used for
the potential of the human body. Although both have the same vitamin content,
but guava vitamin content more than orange fruit.
Guava and orange also has the same
benefits that they prevent cancer. Guava and grapefruit contains antioxidant
compounds that can prevent cancer. Vitamin C content of both , if consumed every day to meet the needs of
vitamin C, reduces free radicals and prevent cancer.
Both these fruits, the
more enjoy doing that citrus fruit because it tastes sweet. However, not all
types of citrus have a sweetness all. Likewise with guava, not all types of
guava has contain vitamin C is high. Although the fruit is
equally as good for your health
Hi ibnu, i have some comment to your writing :)
ReplyDeleteIn the first line, it'll be better if "the fruit" replaced with "fruit"
After dot, you should use capital letter (word :fruit)
Line 2, it should be add word "there" so it will be "there are".
In line 8, if you want to start new paragraph dont forget to add (.) after the last sentence.
In line 13, why you mention grapefruit?
And the last sentence, dont forgt to add (.)
That's all from me.. thank you :)
Dian kusumawati (1420302192)
ReplyDeleteHai ibnul
There are some mistakes in your essay.
1. "The fruit are" should be "the fruits are"
2. "Fruit guava and orange" should be "guava and orange fruits"
3. "Guava and orange also has" should be "guava and orange also have"
"4. "Guava and grape fruit contains" should be "guava and grape fruits contain"
5. "Not all types of guava has" should be "not all types of guava have"
that's all. Thank you
Keep spirit
Andreas India (1420302178)
ReplyDeleteHi ... ibnu
I confused with your sentence (Guava is one of the plants fruits) I think without s on plants" because you say on of
Thank you
Keep spirit!! Ibnu
hi vroh :v, these r some suggestions of ur writing :
ReplyDelete1. avoid using "the" in the 1st par. 'coz ur talking general classification there
2. "fruit is produced of" u must replace with "fruit is produced by"
3. "plants fruits" should be "fruit plants"
4. u must put comma or point aftr the plants fruits (guava) to make it easier to understand
5. u must use Brazil not the brazilian 'coz ur telling the place of origin not the citizen of that country
6. Don't forget 2 include the source where did u get the data from. it will make the readers sure that the data u provide is right
7. what do u mean by "until then to..."? i think u should delete "then" & "to"
these r my comments 4 today, keep studying and i'll see ur good essay someday. call me if u don't agree with my comments. #sasaji (y)