CAUSE-EFFECT
ESSAY
The Effect Children of Growing Up in
Poverty
In Indonesia,
poverty is one of the biggest problems that Indonesia faces. Based on Badan
Pusat Statistik (BPS) data, the number of poverty per September 2015 increased
than last year. It increased 0.17% of total Indonesian society. Therefore,
there are many Indonesian children that live in poor family. Moreover, poverty
must effect their growth. The poor children usually have limitedness in getting
nutrient, education, and having playing time.
First of all,
children of growing up in poverty usually don't get enough nutrients for their
body. Their parents aren't able to give them healthy food. Usually, their
incomes are not enough to buy it. So that, they just give what they can buy for
their children. They don’t consider whether it is health or not. In bigger
problem, they can get famine and less-nutrient.
Beside it
causes children getting less-nutrient, poverty also gives effect the children
right in getting education. Children that come from the poor family usually
have lower education. Mostly, they just study until the elementary level.
Moreover, there are many children cut their study before they graduate. Again,
financial reason is their obstacle continuing their study. Therefore, the
poverty can block their children getting high education.
Another
effect of children of growing up is losing their playing time. They usually
spent their time for working, such as cadging, polishing shoes, singing in bus
or on the road, helping their parents in the rice field and others. Therefore,
they have no time for playing and socializing with others that are their right
as children. Furthermore, there are many cases about children exploitation.
Those cases begin about working under-age children until renting their children
to the cadger. Again, again, and again, its reason is financial limitedness
(poverty).
As the
conclusion, we can state that poverty can give some effects of children
development. It can take the children
rights in getting enough nutrient food, education and playing time. Therefore
children of growing up in poverty must be given more attention especially from
government to get their children rights.
Written
By
Aryani
Mawadah
1420302165
Hello Ms Aryani..
ReplyDeleteI feel like i didn't find any mistakes inside your essay..what a perfect writing..but, it would be better if you give a data which based on the expert's opinion.
Hello Ms. Aryani..your essay is very good, but I will make some corrections for your essay.
ReplyDelete1. On paragraph 1, it should be " The poor children usually have limitedness in getting nutrient, education and having playing time." without coma after word "education"
2. On paragraph 3, "they usually spent" should be "they usually spend"
That's all. Thank you ^^
Hello Ms. Aryani..your essay is very good, but I will make some corrections for your essay.
ReplyDelete1. On paragraph 1, it should be " The poor children usually have limitedness in getting nutrient, education and having playing time." without coma after word "education"
2. On paragraph 3, "they usually spent" should be "they usually spend"
That's all. Thank you ^^
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ReplyDeletehelo mrs.aryani
your essay is very good and i agree with your conclusion.
thank you