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Thursday, 26 May 2016

Causes Effect by Ibnul Chusna Abdul Hamid A 1420302173



     Ibnul Chusna Abdul Hamid A
Causes Effect Essay
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Class 5/E
 Using Technology in Education
            The purpose application in information in the design, production, and service in the organization of human activities. Technology is also in application to solve a problem usually technology used some part of teaching learning in education . Sometimes technology is used to communication with another as far as possible.
            There are many reasons families to buy unlimited technology because we aply technology in almost everything we do in our life, for example use technology at work, communication, construction.
            In education technology use in practice education within power point purposeful to give power every point in presentation and during teaching learning making sure with power point.
            However technology in communication make easy to communicate with another people from long distance, In the other hand technology makes addiction to childhood with play video games, access several website that they not give education but bad effect. Without technology we can’t access information, we learn and sharing from internet with another people.
            Technology is important. It is important for children to learn and understand technology. It is a part of daily life for all people to use a computer or a cell phones. Extremely  technology  can use all problems.


3 comments:

  1. Dian kusumawati (1420302192)
    Hello ibnul
    There are some mistakes in your essay.
    1. "The puspose application in information...." in the first sentence in paragraph 1. What did you mean?
    2. "In education technology use" should be "in education, technology use"
    3. "Use technology at work, communications, construction" you should add "and" before "construction"
    Thank you
    Keep spirit

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  2. Hi ibnu, i have some comment to your writing :)
    In line 4, word "communication" should be replaced by "communicate"
    In line 6, please check your spelling. (Word : aply)
    In line 12, dont forget to end the sentence with (.) not (,)
    Thank you ^^

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  3. Andreas indra (1420302178)
    Hi...ibnu
    I think you forget to give a punctuation in your essay. Like "dot" "comma" and "space" thank you

    Keep spirit!

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