Ibnul Chusna
Abdul Hamid A
Causes Effect Essay
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Class 5/E
Using Technology in Education
The purpose application in
information in the design, production, and service in the organization of human
activities. Technology is also in application to solve a problem usually
technology used some part of teaching learning in education . Sometimes technology
is used to communication with another as far as possible.
There are many reasons families to
buy unlimited technology because we aply technology in almost everything we do
in our life, for example use technology at work, communication, construction.
In education technology use in
practice education within power point purposeful to give power every point in
presentation and during teaching learning making sure with power point.
However technology in communication
make easy to communicate with another people from long distance, In the other
hand technology makes addiction to childhood with play video games, access
several website that they not give education but bad effect. Without technology
we can’t access information, we learn and sharing from internet with another
people.
Technology is important. It is
important for children to learn and understand technology. It is a part of
daily life for all people to use a computer or a cell phones. Extremely technology can use all problems.
Dian kusumawati (1420302192)
ReplyDeleteHello ibnul
There are some mistakes in your essay.
1. "The puspose application in information...." in the first sentence in paragraph 1. What did you mean?
2. "In education technology use" should be "in education, technology use"
3. "Use technology at work, communications, construction" you should add "and" before "construction"
Thank you
Keep spirit
Hi ibnu, i have some comment to your writing :)
ReplyDeleteIn line 4, word "communication" should be replaced by "communicate"
In line 6, please check your spelling. (Word : aply)
In line 12, dont forget to end the sentence with (.) not (,)
Thank you ^^
Andreas indra (1420302178)
ReplyDeleteHi...ibnu
I think you forget to give a punctuation in your essay. Like "dot" "comma" and "space" thank you
Keep spirit!