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Class 5/3
PUBLIC SCHOOLING vs
HOME SCHOOLING
Education is an important need of human being. They need
to get education in order to be up to date. They are also able to know
everything because of education. By education, people can do inovation for
themselves and for the others.
Education can be gotten at some institution especially at
school. Nowadays, school grows in some ways based on the students need. The
most common school is public schooling which is provided by government or
private. Public school provides stages based on the age of its students. On the
other hand, some people have new inovation in shooling . They create home
schooling. It gives advantages for students who want to have their subject at
home. Commonly, home schooling is a kind of school that can be followed by
students without going to school. Basically, public schooling and home
schooling are different not only in the system but also in some aspects.
Firstly, they are different in effectivity side. Home
schooling is more effective than public schooling. It can be done everytime
without paying attention to the time. Students can have their subject whenever
they want wihout forced by their teacher. In contrary, Students of public
schooling will spend most of their time to do school’s assignments. They are
also forced to get up early every morning and have to obey some school’s rules.
In this case, students’ mind will be filled with their school activites that
makes them too busy.
Secondly, they are different in socialization. Public Schooling
provides more meeting than home schooling. For this reason, in Public School
will happen direct interaction between a student with other students and also
teacher with students. Direct interaction will make students have more colorful
life because they will have conversation each others. On the other hand, Home
Schooling is less of socialization. Students will not have direct communication
each others . The teacher also will not meet the students. It will make students
just focus on the assignments that are given by their teacher. There will no
discussion between the students in Teaching Learning process .
Thirdly, In transfering the knowledge Home Schooling is
better than Public Schooling. It can happen because in Home Schooling, teacher
will know the student’s need easily. Teacher just focuses on one student, so
the teacher will know deeper about the student’s characteristics. By knowing
this case, Teacher can easily transfer the knowledge to the student. Student in
Home Schooling will also get minimum disturbance. The student can also have
full consentration in the subject. So, can be concluded that Home Schooling is
better than Public schooling in term of transfering knowledge.
Public
Schooling and Home Schooling are kinds of School system. Both of them have same
goal is that to make everyone smarter. Some people have their own options in
choosing the school. They choose those kind of school because of some reasons.
Every school systems are good, it depends on the students’ want in attending
their school.
Your article is good, but I have little bit suggestion for it.
ReplyDelete1. In the 1 paragraph and 2 paragraph you are wrong when you write inovation, the good one is innovation.
2. You should careful in the capital letter . In paragraph 3 , I thing teaching learning is suitable if doesn't use capital letter in first words.
Thank you.
hy bond, there are some comments for ur essay
ReplyDelete1. "Education can be gotten at some institution especially at school." must be "Education can be gotten at some institution, especially at school."
2."some people have new inovation in shooling." must be "some people have new innovation in schooling."
3. "Firstly, they are different in effectivity side." must be "Firstly, they are different in effectively side."
4. "whenever they want wihout forced by their teacher." must be "whenever they want without forced by their teacher."
5. "their school activites that makes them too busy." must be "their school activities that makes them too busy."
6. " Students will not have direct communication each others." must be "Students will not have direct communication with each other."
CMIIW :V
helooo bond, your essay looks great, but i have some comments for your essay. here they are:
ReplyDelete1. on the second paragraph, "some institution" should be "some institutions", because "some" has told us about plurality right?
2. you made mistypo about "shooling", it's supposed to be "schooling".
that's all bond
Antika Esty S (1420302161/E)
ReplyDeleteHallo bondan, your essay is good but i have some comments for your essay :
1) Sentence "Direct student will make" , it should be "makes".
2) Sentence "It will make students" should be "makes".
Thank you :)
I’m sorry but any words that you must change because that’s wrong word, like :
ReplyDeleteIn the first paragraph, inovation it should be innovation,
In the second paragraph inovation it should be innovation, shooling it should be schooling,
And the third paragraph, everytime it should be every time, without it should be without, activites it should be activities.
Thank you Bondan…
Dian kusumawati (1420302192)
ReplyDeleteHello bondan.
Your essay is very interesting.
I think "student can have their subject whenever they want" should be "student can get their subject whenever they want"
Thanks. Cmiiw
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