Social
Issues in Indonesia
Indonesia
is one of the developing countries in the world. It has some island and cultures,
and also it has a natural resources adequate. From the explanation that all can
be said that Indonesia is a rich country, but it has some problems. One of the
occurred in Indonesia is about social issues. It’s all include about poverty, growing up in poverty, and homelessness.
The
poverty becomes one of the problem that occurrs in a
society. The cause of poverty in Indonesia are
education and unemployment. The
education is still low cause of the society of indonesia can not thrive because the knowledge of the society still
less. In the absence of potential they are easy affected by other countries, so
that they would fall in poverty continuously. In addition to the level of high
unemployment. The jobs narrow in Indonesia led to a society
difficult to obtain a decent job. The habit that don’t want to hard work and
accept can make people to be lazy and finally they will be a beggar and asked
on the road. Sometimes unemployment can cause
violence because they can get income.
One
of the effects of growing up
in poverty is criminality. Criminality
is a behavior of the
aberrant contrary the law in the society. It can be done by individual or
group. It happens because when someone doesn’t
have income while they have to fill the needs of their life, they will do a
variety of this action criminality like steal, the
raiding, killing and etc. In addition terrorism action. Terrorism is a term
used to violence in the form of a threat or war. Terrorism action can be done
by individual, group, a group of people or country as alternative statement
war. It causes society to be threatened and
their mindset to be low.
What
is the homelessness? Homelessness is people who do not have a place to stay remain
and based on the reason, for example lived under a bridge, the edge of the road,
a public place and etc. To fill the needs of daily life often the life of
compassion another person or working as beggar. There are several factors that
pushed someone to be homeless, they are poverty,
natural disasters, a lack of affection, and eviction settlement. The poverty is a first factor. The natural disasters is
one of the disaster happened in the society, so they lost their residence.
The poverty also lead to low level health and lead of
death. This is caused because the cost to the health of high. They are not able
to the cost of hospital and their money just enough to eat. On the baby, the
lack of health led to a lackof nutrition on the baby.
Several
way to contend poverty, they are an increase in labour, abolished corruption
collusion, nepotism, give the zakat or infaq, give the facility school in even,
give the health insurance to certain society.
In
conclusion, we know that Indonesia has several problems about social issue. Social
issues that happened in Indonesia caused by
several factors, one of them is poverty.
The poverty is caused
several factors like education, unemployment,
criminality, homelessness etc. It’s all covering culture, economic, and
politics problems. The government should think method to contend poverty in
indonesia such as give facility and sevice to poor society. It can help them to
little bit of poor society.
In your opinion, this article is about knowladge in social or economy? if viewed from the effect? However, Indonesia better than other state.. good antika
ReplyDeleteIn your opinion, this article is about knowladge in social or economy? if viewed from the effect? However, Indonesia better than other state.. good
ReplyDeleteYour essay is good, but I want to correct some mistakes in your essay. On paragraph 1, you should write "some islands" because it is plural. Then, still on paragraph 1, what do you mean with "one of the occured"? I think it should be "one of the problems that occured".
ReplyDeleteNext on paragraph 2, you should write "the causes" because you used "are", so it's more than one cause. You also have to pay attention when writing the name of country. It should be "Indonesia".
On paragraph 5, I think you should write "For the baby" not "on the baby".
Last, on paragraph 6, you should write "several ways". Thank you :)
Hana Suci Anggraeni (1420302175/E)
ReplyDeleteyour essay look great, but you'd better to give it the specific title. i've seen your essay is talking about the poverty case, so give the poverty unsure inside your title ^^
antika, on this occasion i'd like to give you my comments about your essay. here they are:
1. you have to pay attention for using the conjunctions and punctuations inside your essay.
2. on the third pargraph, this statement "like steal, the raiding, killing and etc" is better to be replaced like this "like stealing, the raiding, killing and etc". because if you choose "and" between them, the words in between should be balanced.
that's all antika. thank's ^^
Hi... this is my comment for yor esssay
ReplyDelete1. "that occurrs" should be "that occurs"\
2. " indonesia " should be " Indonesia "
3. "The habit that don’t" should be "The habit that doesn’t"
4."The poverty also lead" should be "The poverty also leads"
5. "a lackof nutrition " should be "a lack of nutrition"
6. "sevice" should be "service"
andreas indra bagus (1420302178)
ReplyDeletehi antika
emm after i read your essay i just wanna give you some suggestion. in some of parts you forget to give a "space" , " capital" and make some "typo" . thank you
keep spirit !! antika