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Sunday, 22 May 2016

Cause and Effect Essay by: Aldino Anjas Bagaskara

Fast Food In Modern Society

            People nowadays choose fast food rather than a traditional one because many people in moder era think eating a fast food is a new lifestyle. Modern people especially in Indonesia enjoying fast food while they’re on a break or for breakfast, usually the customer of fast food in Indonesia is student or the apperentice especially the young one. Some of their customer is also people from middle-aged.

            Fast food bring a new taste in people nowadays, because fast food originally from the western and we’re a eastern people which definitely have a different taste about the food. Fast food nowadays serving a food we don’t know before such as hamburger, spaghetti, pizza, chicken nugget, and something like that. Food that served by fast food restaurant definitely has different taste with Indonesian food, because a lot of Indonesian food use Spices as their ingredient, so people Indonesia will try something new like fast food. Fast food bring a different view in serving a food for a modern society nowadays. Many people choose fast food because it looks so tasty and can make people hungry and coming to the restaurant and buy some fast food. Fast food restaurant serving a food really fast we don’t have to wait long for ordering a food. Fast food restaurant always have something new to keep their customer. Fast food restaurant is always clean and cozy that’s why many people want to eat at the fast food restaurant. They also give a free Wi-Fi connection for their customer who eat at their restaurant, this free Wi-Fi will make the customer feel want to stay and they also have a children package which is include a toy, fast food restaurant also have a birthday package if the customer want to celebrate their birthday party there.

So, modern people nowadays choose fast food restaurant because of their taste is different from the Indonesian food, their serving system is incridible, and also the restaurant is always clean and have a great facility so the customer will always coming back again and again because they love the service of fast food.



Name  : Aldino Anjas Bagaskara
SN        : 1420302195
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9 comments:

  1. Unknown24 May 2016, 16:29:00

    your text is good, but How if you do not shortened "don’t", so that the look more formal :)
    And i think that "so" at the beginning of the sentence was not allowed..

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  2. Unknown24 May 2016, 22:40:00

    hey anjas, there are some mistake in your text, there are
    1. in first paragraph the word moder must be modern.
    2. in second paragraph the word "a" must be "an"
    3. in third paragraph "incridible" must be "incredible"

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  3. Unknown25 May 2016, 21:40:00

    Hi anjass. what a cool essay, but i have some comments for your essay, here they are:
    1. on the first paragraph, the word "enjoying" supposed to be "enjoy", because it told about present, right?.
    2. on second paragraph, the words "Fast food nowadays serving" should be "Fast food nowadays serve".
    3. you have to pay attention about the implementation of present and progressive tenses inside the sentence.

    That's all anjas.

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  4. Unknown25 May 2016, 21:58:00

    Hallo Anjas.. It's good essay but some mistakes word in your essay. They are:
    1. In sentence "fast food bring..." is wrong, should be "fast food brings..."
    2. In sentence "modern people indonesia enjoying..." is wrong should be "enjoy" not "enjoying"
    Thank you :)

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  5. Teza26 May 2016, 07:45:00

    Hello Anjas!!!
    I’m sorry but any word that you must change because that’s wrong word, like :
    In the firs paragraph, moder it should be modern, apperentice it should be apprentice
    And the last paragraph, incridible it should be incredible.
    Thank ypu Anjas… 

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  6. Teza26 May 2016, 07:46:00

    I mean words not word..thank you

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  7. Unknown26 May 2016, 16:31:00

    Dian kusumawati (1420302192)
    Hello anjas,
    There are some mistakes.
    1. "Some of their customer" should be "some of their customers"
    2. "Fast food nowadays serving a food we don't know" should be "fast food nowadays serve a food that we don`t know"
    3. "A lot of indonesian food" should be "a lot of indonesian foods"
    4. "People indonesia" should be "indonesian people"
    5. "Fast food restaurant always have" should be "fast food restaurant has"
    Thank you
    Keep spirit

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  8. Unknown26 May 2016, 16:38:00

    Andreas indra (1420302178)
    Hi...kakak aldino
    Your essay is good,but you just makes a several mistake like .(the customer will always coming should be the customer will always come)

    And the second is ( if the customer want . I think should be if the customer wants)

    Thank you
    Keep spirit!!

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  9. Unknown26 May 2016, 16:38:00

    Hi anjas, i have some comment to your writing :)
    In line 13, word spices, shouldn't use capital letter because it is in the middle of the sentence.
    That's all from me, thank you ^^

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