CAUSE-EFFECT
ESSAY
(Umi Setiya Rini 1420302184)
“What Causes
Students to Think School is boring?”
School is a
place where students get knowledge and education. The student’s learning
condition are influenced by the environment in the school. It is really
important. But there are many students think that school is boring. It is
caused by their learning method that not creative, busy schedule of activities
and many assignments that are given by
teacher.
The learning
method influences the student’s appeal
to join in the class. The teacher who teach with more creativity is more
interesting for students. Usually, students more interested with creative
learning method. If the method in learning process use static method, the
students will feel bored and they are not motivated to join the class. They
have no spirit related with the subject.
The students have busy schedule in the intra lesson as well as extra
lesson. That makes the students feel tired and not concentrate, so they will
feel bored to join in the school activities. The student’s activities is
more so that they fell tired and not concentrate in the lesson. Because of
weariness, the students won’t concentrate and enjoy the learning process in the
class, although students not enjoy in process learning. The concentration is
important for the student’s success in the learning process. Students who
concentrate will get the lesson and understand
the material
easily.
The more assignments that are given by the teacher will reduce the student’s
time to relax and refresh themselves outside the school. The assignments need lot of time to finish it. They will feel stress to do their assignments . The students
need time to relax and refresh, so that
they won’t feel stress. If the students feel stress, they will not have spirit
to do everything, especially that related with the assignment.
The students feel that school is boring because the learning method is not creative, busy schedule of activities
and many assignments that are given by teacher. If the methods of learning more
creative, it will make the students interested with the lesson. The busy
schedule activities and many assignments will reduce student’s break time. So
they will feel stress and can not concentrate in the class.
Hana Suci Anggraeni (1420302175/E)
ReplyDeleteHi Ms Umi..your essay is good, but i have some comments for your essay..here they are:
1. On first paragraph, the third and fourth sentences supposed to be a whole sentence, because the word "but" is prohibitted if you put it at the beginning of the sentence. after that, don't forget to give comma (,) after the word "but".
2. on the second paragraph, you should put "are" after the word "students" in the statement below:
" Usually, students more interested ", it will become like this " Usually, students are more interested".
i think, that's all Ms. Umi..keep up your good writing..
Antika Esty S (1420302161/E)
ReplyDeleteHi Ms Umi, your essay is good but i'd like to comment for your essay
1. "In learning process use" should be "uses"
2. "Students not enjoy" should be "students are not"
3. "It will make" should be "makes"
Thank you :)
Shafira Adhelia (1420302179)
ReplyDeleteHello Ms. Umi! Your essay is good, but I found some mistakes in your essay. Here are my corrections for your mistakes :
1. On paragraph 1, "that not creative" should be "that is not creative"
2. On paragraph 4, "lot of time" should be "a lot of times"
3. I think you tend to repeat same sentence although it has been used it before. It will be better if you do not repeat it.
That's all. Thank you ^^
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