Name : DWI ARIF WIBOWO
SN : 1420302158
Class : E
Windows vs.
Linux
We live in
modern era and computer is part of this era. Computer makes everything easier.
A computer needs operating system and it is one of the most important computer programs. Computers cannot run without operating system. There are two popular
operating system, they are Windows and Linux. They are two operating systems
which are constantly competing from control of the computer market. They have
many users that support their activities.
One obvious
difference is the cost. Linux is free for home uses while Windows is not free.
You must buy license to use Windows. The cost is about $120 for home uses. It is
more expensive than Linux. Linux is licensed by GNU (General Public License)
that allows for free distribution of the Linux. Anyone can modify the code of
Linux to set their specific needs as long as the code is never sold. Linux is
very cheap only $319 for server uses while Windows is $810.
Security is one
of the differences. Linux has better security than Windows. Linux has a good
security feature which is free from viruses and it is difficult to be hacked.
The Linux model or security uses UNIX, which was the first multitasking and
platform portable computer operating system. In the other hand, Windows has
many viruses and is easily hacked. There are many flaws in the Windows that
make it more vulnerable to security attacks. Many people believe that Windows
is the primary target of security problems and viruses because it has the
largest market.
Windows has
excellent user friendliness. No other operating system comes closer than
Windows. It is practical, so you do not need to hire a computer professional to
manage your computer. Linux is little difficult. User needs to buy a manual book to learn
Linux. Linux is very user friendliness if users are used to use it. It needs a
person that has above average computer skills to understand Linux in the first
using.
Both of them are
operating system. Operating is needed to run the computer. The aim of operating
system is to organize and control hardware and software. Both Linux and Windows
are multi operating systems. It allows multiple application programs to be installed.
Linux is good for person that has high computer skills. Windows is good for
everyone but it has excellent user friendliness but there is a license that
must be bought.
your essay very good, but you should pay attention on repetition word computer,you can replace it,for example " it ".
ReplyDeletethank you :) sorry :)
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DeleteHana Suci Anggraeni (1420302175/E)
ReplyDeleteHi bow, what an awesome title!! but, i'd like to give you my comments about your essay. here they are:
1. on the third paragraph, the word "and is easily hacked" supposed to be "and it is easily hacked".
2. on the last paragraph, the statement "It allows multiple application" supposed to be "They allow multiple application", because the subject here are Linux and Windows.
That's all bowo..
Hi bowo..your essay topic is interesting, but i've found some mistakes inside your essay. here they are:
ReplyDelete1. "In the other hand" should be "On the other hand"
2. "are used to use it" should be "are used to useing it"
CMIIW :v
Hi Bowo! I'd like to make some corrections to your essay. Here are my corrections :
ReplyDelete1. On paragraph 1, you should write "there are two popular operating systems"
2. On paragraph 4, "little difficult" should be "little bit difficult"
3. On the last paragraph, it should be "both of them are operating systems"
Thank you
Antika Esty S (1420302161/E)
ReplyDeleteHi bowo, your essayis good but i have some comments for ypur essay
1. Sentence "windwos has many viruses and is easily" ,i think be better if you wrote "it is easily".
2. "Both linux and windows" it is better if you wrote "both of..."
Thank you :)
Hello Bowo!!!
ReplyDeleteI am Teza Putra Handika. I am 19 years old. I want to buy a computer but I still zero for technology. I wanna ask to you about the program of the computer that I must choose. So what is your suggest to me?
Thank you Bowo…
Hi, wooo
ReplyDeleteMy name is malya, not mal-mal :D
I want to tell you that "Is easily" maybe your mean 'it is easily'
In the part 'there two are popular operating system..' maybe "..systems.." thanks